Biological Scientific
Writing (BIOL 825)
Department of
Biological Sciences, Fort Hays State
University
Instructor: Mark
Eberle
Course
Homepage
Lecture Notes -- IMRaD Format
and Publication Process
Index of Contents on this Webpage:
ORGANIZATION OF SCIENTIFIC PAPERS
READING SCIENTIFIC LITERATURE
PUBLICATION PROCESS
Primary Literature, Secondary Literature, and Gray
Literature
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Primary literature is the first publication of original research in
a journal or other widely available publication that has undergone independent
(typically anonymous) peer review and is sufficiently documented to allow
others to repeat the experiments and verify the results (i.e., the methods
and results are fully documented).
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Secondary literature is a summary based on other literature sources
and includes textbooks, review papers, articles in popular magazines, etc.
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Gray literature can be based on original research or secondary sources,
but it has not gone through the peer review that manuscripts undergo when
submitted to most professional journals, and it often is not widely available.
This typically includes reports submitted to governmental agencies and
private organizations.
Keys to Successful Scientific Writing
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Obtain a copy of the "instructions for authors" for the journal and
follow the instructions.
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Think about where you are going before you begin to write.
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Write to illuminate, not to impress. Use simple but informative words
and sentences.
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Make a statement and support it with your results or literature sources.
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Stick to the point.
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Make smooth transitions within and between paragraphs. Create a flow
of words and ideas.
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Do not make the reader work hard.
NOT GOOD: The difference in absorption rates
is shown in Table 1.
[Reader has to stop and look at Table 1.]
BETTER: Alcohol is more readily absorbed into the
bloodstream from distilled beverages than from brewed beverages (Table
1).
[Reader knows what Table 1 documents and can look at it later for
details.]
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Do not plagiarize.
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Paraphrase information from other sources and cite them appropriately
within your sentence or at the end of your sentence.
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Simply replacing a few words without altering sentence structure or
simply transposing clauses or phrases within a sentence are considered
inappropriate in scientific writing, even if the original source is cited.
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Use quotes around substantial phrases or sentences that do not differ
from the original source, but keep in mind that direct quotes are rarely
used in scientific writing.
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Always cite the original source.
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Do not be teleological.
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Proofread carefully. Use the spell-checker, but do not rely on
it entirely (e.g., two be or not too bee careful). Consider the
following:
Aoccdrnig to rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy,
it deosn't mttaer in waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the only iprmoetnt
tihng is taht the frist and lsat ltteer be at the rghit pclae. The rset
can be a total mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit porbelm. This is
bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod
as a wlohe.
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Be neat; appearances count.
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Keep copies of everything you submit.
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Be clear and concise!
ORGANIZATION of SCIENTIFIC
PAPERS
Title & Key Words [also see Day
and Gastel, 2006:39-44]
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Be specific and concise. This will attract readers
to your manuscript.
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More people will read your title than read your abstract,
and more people will read your abstract than read your article. Your title
and abstract are important in encouraging people to read your article.
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Do not begin a title with "a", "an", "the"
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Do not begin a title with superfluous phrases, such as
"Observations on" or "Notes on", that can be omitted without any loss of
clarity.
Authors and Addresses [also see Day
and Gastel, 2006:45-51]
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Decide well in advance who will be an author and make sure it is clear
to all parties.
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The address you use should be the address of your employer or the department
in which you were a student at the time you conducted the research.
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Most journals also allow you to also list your present address.
Abstract (past tense) [also see Day
and Gastel, 2006:52-55]
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Brief (< 250 words) summary of IMRaD.
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Does not include literature citations or statistical values
(e.g., probability values).
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Printed first, but written last.
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This is what potential readers will use to decide whether
to read your manuscript.
Introduction (generally present tense, except the literature
reviewed) [also see Day and Gastel, 2006:56-59]
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Should be written before research is conducted.
You should not begin your research until you thoroughly
understand what has already been done and what your research will contribute
to this body of knowledge.
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Serves three main purposes:
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describes the nature and scope of the problem,
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reviews the literature, and
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states the hypothesis (or hypotheses) of current research.
Methods (primarily past tense) [also
see Day and Gastel, 2006:60-65]
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Detailed description of methods (including statistics)
and materials used in study (research must be reproducible).
Widely used statistics (e.g., chi-square test) do not need to be described
in detail.
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Some citations are possible, but generally describe their methods, too.
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Acknowledge manufacturers when using proprietary names.
Provide company name, city, state, and possibly country in parentheses
after proprietary name, or use appropriate symbols for trademarks, etc.
as required by journal.
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In some journals, this section might include a description of the study
area.
Results (past tense) [also see Day and
Gastel, 2006:66-68]
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"Just the facts, ma'am." [Sgt. Joe Friday,
LAPD]
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Some results are presented in their entirety.
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Some results are summarized, perhaps statistically.
Include all appropriate values (e.g., P, n, SE,
SD,
df).
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Some results are summarized in tables, graphs, or images.
Tables and graphs should only be used when information cannot be conveyed
clearly and concisely in text.
Discussion [also see Day and Gastel,
2006:69-72]
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Discuss, do not recapitulate, the results.
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Explain how your results agree or contrast with other
studies.
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Point out exceptions or unsettled points.
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Discuss the implications or applications of your work.
Acknowledgments [also see Day and Gastel,
2006:73-74]
Include 1) those who helped with fieldwork, statistics,
and other essential parts of your research; 2) sources of funding, equipment,
and other logistical support; and 3) reviewers (including anonymous reviewers,
but not editors).
Literature Cited [also see Day and Gastel,
2006:75-82]
- Avoid common mistakes.
- ALWAYS carefully check the content of each citation
against the original publication.
- ALWAYS carefully check each citation in the text against
the citations listed in the Literature Cited section. Are there any missing
citations or any extra citations not included in the text?
- Name and year system in text.
...Eberle (2002). [If the name of the author is part of the sentence.]
...(Eberle 2002). [If the name of the author is not part of the sentence.]
or ...(Eberle, 2002) [Use of comma depends on journal.]
- Listed chronologically in text in most journals to acknowledge
priority (some journals use alphabetical sequence).
...(Williams 1987a, 1987b; Ernsting 1989; Eberle and Schmidt
1997, 2000; Eberle et al. 1998; Eberle 2002). [Some journals now replace
"et al." with "and others".]
- Listed alphabetically in Literature Cited section (some
variation in style among journals; follow journal style).
Eberle, M. E. 2002.
Eberle, M. E., N. D. Lambrecht, and M. E. Schmidt. 1998.
Eberle, M. E., and M. E. Schmidt. 1997. [Don't forget the comma
after the initials of the first author -- they are out of sequence]
Ernsting, G. W. 1989.
Williams, K. J. 1987.
Williams, K. J. 1988. [Listed chronologically when the author(s)
is the same.]
Comments
on citing internet sources and unpublished (gray) literature.
Appendixes
Appendixes (appendices) typically come at the end of a manuscript, and
summarize lists of essential documentation, such as specimens examined,
localities, etc., that do not fit in the main text.
Tables -- see handouts [also see Day and Gastel, 2006:85-91]
Table
Creation Exercise (pdf file)
- Do not use tables, unless absolutely necessary; they cost more to publish
than text.
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Table legends should be written to stand alone; the reader should not
have to refer back to the text.
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Be sure to spell out names of genera and other abbreviations, even if
they have been used in the text.
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Be sure to include relevant locations, dates, etc. that were included
in the text.
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Use horizontal lines to separate the table header row from the data.
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Do not use lines to separate rows or columns of data in tables.
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Elements should read down columns, not across rows.
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Do not use shading or bold font; they might not publish or photocopy
clearly.
Figures -- see handouts [also see Day and Gastel, 2006:92-104]
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Figures are more expensive to reproduce than text, so the smallest possible
image will be published to conserve space (and costs).
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Check a reduction of your figure to be certain that lines and text are
readable if it is reduced to fit the journal page or a single column on
a page.
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Figure legends should be written to stand alone; the reader should not
have to refer back to the text.
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Be sure to spell out names of genera and other abbreviations, even if
they have been used in the text.
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Be sure to include relevant locations, dates, etc. that were included
in the text.
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High contrast is important in black-and-white illustrations.
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Shades of gray and patterns (used, for example, on bar graphs and maps)
are difficult to reproduce clearly in a journal, especially when the figure
is reduced to fit the journal page or a single column on a page. They also
do not photocopy clearly.
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If electronic copies of figures are required, they should be high-resolution
files, such as TIFF (for halftones or detailed line drawings) or EPS files
(for line drawings), not JPG or other files that look sharp on a computer
screen, but are not as sharp on a journal page. Images in Word or Powerpoint
also are difficult formats for publishers to use.
READING SCIENTIFIC LITERATURE
Getting Started
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Although your research project will be relatively specific and narrow
in scope, it is important to understand both the broader context into which
your research will fit and what your project can and should include (or
exclude). This will help you select the appropriate articles and other
literature you will need to read for your research.
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Obtain background knowledge on the subject from texts, review papers,
M.S. theses, etc.
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Consult with your advisor and others about good background sources.
Reading Journal Articles and Book Chapters
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Read the abstract first (if there is one).
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It will explain the basic goals and conclusions of the study.
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It will help you decide whether to read the article.
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Read the introduction.
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This should provide an overview of previous research. You might want
to read some of these sources.
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It should include the hypotheses being tested, and help you place this
study in the context of your research.
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Unless you have a specific reason for focusing on methods, give the
Methods (Study Area) section a quick read initially.
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Get a general idea of the experimental design, techniques, etc. Usually,
you do not need understand the full details to understand the results and
discussion.
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Come back to this section later, if necessary.
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Read the Results twice.
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Initially focus on qualitative results -- the overview.
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On the second reading, focus on quantitative results (e.g., statistical
analyses).
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Read the Discussion
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How do the conclusions relate to your research project (your hypotheses)?
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In addition to publications that agree with your hypotheses (and eventually,
perhaps, your conclusions), you should include research with conclusions
that are contrary to your hypotheses (or conclusions).
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Check the Literature Cited section for other publications that might
be useful to you.
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Reread the Introduction and Discussion (and perhaps the Methods) with
a view to what literature cited you should obtain to read that might be
important to your research.
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Reread important papers later in your research process.
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You might gain a better (perhaps different) understanding of the information
in a publication as you continue to learn about your research topic.
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For relevant publications you have read, record complete bibliographical
information and obtain a copy of the article or chapter.
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Do NOT mark in or remove pages of journals, books, or other publications
that do not belong to you.
PUBLICATION PROCESS
Relative "prestige" of journals
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Nature and Science
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International and national journals in each field
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Regional journals (e.g., Southwestern
Naturalist, Western North American
Naturalist, Prairie
Naturalist)
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State journals (e.g., Transactions
of the Kansas Academy of Science)
Chose the most appropriate journal where you will submit
your manuscript
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Choose only one journal; submitting your manuscript to 2 or more journals
simultaneously is not acceptable.
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Choose the most "prestigious" journal that publishes similar manuscripts
and is likely to reach the audience you reasonably want to reach.
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If your research includes information essentially of "local" interest,
it will not be accepted by a journal with an international audience.
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If your research simply confirms studies done elsewhere, it likely will
be accepted only by a regional or state journal.
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Consider the possible backlog of manuscripts and lag time for publication
of an accepted manuscript.
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Some journals accept only electronic submissions; be sure you prepare
all of your files appropriately
Packaging and mailing your manuscript
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Retain one paper copy of everything you send to the editor, even if
you save it as a computer file (computer files can be corrupted by viruses).
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If paper copies are required, submit the specified number of paper copies
in a strong envelope.
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Cardboard (flat-rate priority mail) and Tyvek priority-mail envelopes
are available at no charge from the US Post Office and some private courier
services.
- Consider using courier services for mail being sent outside the USA
and Canada. This usually ensures that a single courier service is responsible
for your package.
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If computer disks are required, enclose them in a disk-mailer.
- Include a cover "letter" as required (example).
Review process, proofs, and reprints
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Always endeavor to be courteous to an editor; most are unpaid and are
working as editors in addition to their paid employment.
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Managing editors record tracking information on the submitted manuscript
and direct it to the appropriate associate editor.
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Associate editors:
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arrange for (usually) 2 anonymous reviewers (perhaps 3, if the first
2 disagree),
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decide whether to accept or reject a manuscript (rejection rates are
highest for more prestigious journals, typically exceeding 50%),
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work with the authors on revisions.
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You must make changes suggested by the editor and reviewers or explain
in a cover letter why you feel such changes are inappropriate.
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Major changes might cause the editor to return the manuscript to the
initial reviewers for a follow-up review.
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Some "accepted" manuscripts might have to be shortened substantially
from a feature article to a note.
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Return your revised manuscript within the deadline (unless you choose
to submit it elsewhere).
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Managing editors (possibly assisted by Copy Editors) deal with publishing
accepted manuscripts.
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Additional modifications probably will be made by the managing editor.
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Galley proofs are returned to the author for a final check of the version
to be published.
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Galley proofs are copies of your accepted manuscript as it will appear
in the journal.
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Changes made on galley proofs by authors can be charged to the author;
thus, it is important to carefully check final copies of manuscripts before
they are sent to the printer.
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Corrections made by the editor or the printer are not charged to authors.
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Publication costs (page charges) typically are charged to authors.
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Current page charges for our regional journals
range from $40 to $80 per page.
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Additional charges might be applied to cover the cost of tables and
figures (and the cost of changes to galley proofs).
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Some journals subsidize publication costs, paying a portion of the costs
if one or more authors are members of the society.
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Reprints typically are ordered at the time the proofs are delivered
to the author.
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Paper reprints and electronic reprints (usually pdf files) are prepared
at the same time the journal is printed.
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Reprints are purchased either from the printer (e.g., Allen Press) or
from the journal. Check with the Managing Editor to be sure your order
goes to the correct place.